Reflection on writing. Week 4

My narritive writing

I feel good about my writing because my literacy group had to do a narrative before the end of Thursday as a challenge and I . One thing that I will remember for the future is to set the sence as I didn't do that in my writing until I was reminded by Mrs Akkerman. I used to not edit and revise but now I go over my writing again and again to see if there are any mistakes or better words I can put in.

Here are a few of my sentenses I used for my writing

I had never seen rain like this before. It almost seems, green? = The hook

At least the scores are even now. 1 to Jax, 1 to me. = Another hook

My room, the only place I really feel welcome. = The beginning sentence to chapter 1