Writing reflection

Writing Reflection

In my writing refection I have found it quite easy to switch from Info report to a moment in time/first person. I just think about changing and it happens

 You have to have lots of descriptive words. I have 94 and still going. I'm probably going to get up to 110 or more at this rate. Here's one of my first few paragraphs.

Moment in time

 I'm here, gigantic gates greet me. I see million and millions of people flowing in and out. I'm really here, dream world.