Week 8 writing reflection

Week 8 writing reflection

This week for our writing, Aroha Tahi had to retell the last supper. I feel good about the way I used speech marks and how I followed all the rules of writing with them. One thing I will remember for the future is to put lower case letters after I put speech marks. I used to put capital letters straight after the talking marks but now I use lower case. In the writing I learned that the Garden of Gethsemane is also known as the Mount of Olives, as I didn't know that fact before.

Faith of the Centurion

Faith of the Centurion 

'This week for R.E. and writing, my hub had to do a retell on the scripture, 'The faith of the Centurion'. I feel good about the way I revised and edited my writing to make it even better than before. The faith of the centurion is about a leader Capernaum ask a great favour from Jesus, to heal is much loved servant. Since he had such great faith, his servant got cured very quickly.

Here is the video of 'The Faith of the Centurion'.

My previous writing goal

My previous writing goal. 

My previous writing goal was, 'to proofread my writing to make corrections in spelling, punctuation and grammar.' I feel good about achieving this goal and now I remember to do it often. Most of the time I make my writing way better than before. One thing I will remember for the future is to ask my buddy to reread my writing because I sometimes forget to edit. I used to just finish and do somthing else, but now I reread again and again. Here is some proof that I have completed my goal successfully.

Look at my editing!

Sorry it can't be read. Lines - editing.

Week 5: Reflection

Week 5 Reflection

This week I chose the writing goal, 'I can identify and evaluate the way writers’ use language and ideas to suit their purpose'. The people that will help me with this goal are my teachers, Mrs Akkerman, Mrs Robbie, Mrs Price and my parents. Some equipment that will help are some planing sheets and the literacy hub that was given to my writing group. I hope I can achieve this goal as well as this one, 'To proofread my writing to make corrections in spelling , puncuation and grammer'. That was my last writing goal.